Well, after about three months of stewing over it, I've figured out the best means to tighten the story.


There are several plot points running conjointly and currently they feel fractured. I realized by expanding one of the subcharacter's roles that this could all be fixed.



I still have to write the new sections...but it shouldn't be too laborious...



If all goes well - I think a mid-Feb first draft will be in order. Finally! This has been the longest book project I've ever worked on. With research and writing combined almost four years of hard work. Light at the end of the tunnel...



I promised to get this book finished sooner than later...



Thanks for checking in,

-bg.